Okay, first up? I don't believe in Professor Oak/Birch/whatever here having not enough pokémon, because that is just a blatant excuse for any bad OC to get a stronger pokémon. Okay, so, maybe Ash was one; but have you noticed how it hasn't occured to anyone else besides Ash? (He had get a Pikachu; it was a plothole, sort of.)
And nobody starts a journey at thirteen(unless they have reasons, like they didn't want to, blah, blah...) -- the fact that trainers go at age ten or eleven is to prepare them for the world; and many stay out there exploring for years; that's why you have older trainers all over the place.
And Professor Maple -- well. I see Maplestory dancing in my eyes.Story Or Series Title: Pokémon: The Hoenn ExpeditionSummary:
15 year old Yivyn Azuderé has set off on his adventure throughout Hoenn with a somewhat special Togepi. He'll play a major role in a major event soon...he just doesn't know what yet.Fandom:
Gotta catch'em all and all that stuff.
Culprit Author's Name: YivwnFull Name (plus titles if any):
Yivyn Azuderé (How would one pronounce that? Just curious.)Full Species(es):
Fated StuHair Color (include adjectives):
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Togepi.Annoying Connections To Canon Characters:
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Staring journey at thirteen of age, starting with specially-bred Togepi.Annoying Story Traits:
Lack of grammar, paragraphing, spelling errors, strange names, easy plot points.Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: ( Today's the day!Collapse )